Good use of passive voice, Andy! The second one about Paulina Rubio is a little off because she is the person who sings.One way to change it would be to use a famous song of hers and say that it is sung by her. Here's an example, "Pobre Niña Rica" is sung in the National Auditorium by Paulina Rubio.Here's an example using Paulina Rubio,Paulina Rubio is recorded singing in the National Auditorum a concert DVD.
oops, I forgot to say "for."Paulina Rubio is recorded singing live in the National Auditorium for a concert DVD.
Good use of passive voice, Andy!
ResponderEliminarThe second one about Paulina Rubio is a little off because she is the person who sings.
One way to change it would be to use a famous song of hers and say that it is sung by her.
Here's an example,
"Pobre Niña Rica" is sung in the National Auditorium by Paulina Rubio.
Here's an example using Paulina Rubio,
Paulina Rubio is recorded singing in the National Auditorum a concert DVD.
oops, I forgot to say "for."
ResponderEliminarPaulina Rubio is recorded singing live in the National Auditorium for a concert DVD.